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The Enlightened Ones - a short story.

  • Writer: Tom
    Tom
  • Sep 6
  • 4 min read
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In a quiet valley cradled by ancient mountains, where the wind whispered secrets older than the stars, lived a small village called Haven Peak. The people of Haven Peak were kind but restless, always chasing dreams of wisdom, seeking the elusive truth of existence. They built temples, studied scrolls, and meditated under the great oak at the village’s heart, hoping to glimpse the divine simplicity of life’s purpose. Yet, despite their efforts, they often felt adrift, as if the answers lay just beyond their reach.


Among them lived a dog named Sable, a scruffy mutt with fur the color of twilight and eyes that seemed to hold the weight of countless sunrises. Sable belonged to no one and everyone, wandering freely from doorstep to doorstep, greeting each villager with a wag of her tail and a warmth that melted even the weariest hearts. She was a constant in Haven Peak, as much a part of the village as the cobblestone paths or the morning mist.

The villagers often spoke of enlightenment, of a state where one could live in harmony with the universe, free from doubt or sorrow. They imagined it as a distant peak, reachable only through years of discipline and sacrifice. But Sable, unnoticed by most, lived this truth every day.


One spring morning, a young woman named Elara sat by the oak, her face heavy with worry. She had spent years studying the philosophies of Haven Peak’s elders, yet felt no closer to understanding her place in the cosmos. As she sighed, Sable trotted up, dropping a well-chewed stick at her feet. Elara laughed despite herself, tossing the stick for Sable to chase. The dog bounded after it, returning with a gleeful bark, her joy infectious. For a moment, Elara’s burdens lifted, and she felt a spark of something pure—a fleeting connection to the world around her.


This became a ritual. Each day, Sable would find Elara, coaxing her into games of fetch or nudging her hand for a scratch behind the ears. Elara began to notice things about Sable she hadn’t before. When a villager scolded Sable for stealing a loaf of bread, the dog simply lowered her head, then returned the next day with the same eager affection, no grudge in her heart. When a storm trapped the village indoors, Sable sat patiently by the hearth, content to simply be near her people. When children ran through the streets, Sable joined them, her playful spirit igniting laughter that echoed through the valley.


One evening, as the village gathered under the stars for a festival, Elara watched Sable weave through the crowd. The dog greeted each person with the same boundless excitement, whether they’d been gone for hours or moments. An old man, usually stern, softened as Sable nuzzled his hand. A child, tearful from a fall, giggled as Sable licked her face. Elara’s heart stirred. “What if,” she whispered to herself, “Sable knows something we’ve all forgotten?”


The thought lingered. Elara began to observe other dogs in the village, Rusty, the baker’s hound, who waited patiently each day for a crust of bread; Lila, the shepherd’s companion, who braved wolves to protect her flock without hesitation. Each dog, in its own way, seemed to embody qualities the villagers chased in their meditations: loyalty that never wavered, forgiveness that flowed effortlessly, patience that endured hardship, joy that needed no reason, and a contentment that asked for nothing but presence.


Elara shared her thoughts with the village elder, a woman named Vira, whose eyes crinkled with knowing. “We seek truth in the stars,” Vira said, “but perhaps it walks among us on four legs. Dogs do not question their place in the universe. They simply are. Maybe that is the enlightenment we seek—not a destination, but a way of being.”


The idea spread through Haven Peak like wildfire. The villagers began to watch their dogs more closely, noting their quiet wisdom. They saw how dogs loved without condition, forgave without resentment, and found joy in the smallest moments, a warm patch of sunlight, a gentle pat, a scamper through the grass. Slowly, the people of Haven Peak began to emulate these traits. They forgave old grudges, found joy in simple gatherings, and learned to sit in stillness, content just to be.


Sable, oblivious to the shift she’d inspired, continued her wanderings. She didn’t know she was enlightened, nor did she care. She chased butterflies, napped in the shade, and greeted each day with a wag of her tail. And in her presence, the villagers found a truth they’d sought for generations: that enlightenment wasn’t a distant peak but a path walked with a playful spirit, a loyal heart, and a love for the moment at hand.


Years later, when Elara was old and gray, she sat under the oak with a new generation of dogs at her feet. The village had changed, less restless, more alive. The people of Haven Peak no longer chased enlightenment; they lived it, guided by the quiet wisdom of their truest companions. And as Elara tossed a stick for a young pup to chase, she smiled, knowing the dogs had always been the enlightened ones, showing the way with every joyful bound.

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